This service exists because revision is often where good feedback stalls—not because it’s unclear, but because it’s hard to apply alone.

You can choose between written-only support or a blend of live reflection and practical next steps—depending on how much real-time guidance you want during revision.

Who This is For

This add-on is for writers who have completed a Manuscript Development with me and now need guided support as they revise — not another critique, not another re-diagnosis, but practical help while you’re in the trenches of revision.

What This Includes

Standard Revision Support — Written Only

• Four weeks of structured, asynchronous support

• Weekly written check-ins tailored to your revision focus

• Guidance on:

  • Applying Manuscript Development feedback

  • Clarifying revision priorities

  • Sense-checking new and revised scenes

  • Identifying when a change strengthens (or weakens) your manuscript

• Responses grounded in your original feedback and current revision decisions

This tier is ideal if you prefer thoughtful written focus and space to revise at your own pace.

Premium Revision Support — Live + Written

Everything in the Standard tier, plus:

• A 30-minute live text-chat session each week

• After each live check-in, you’ll receive:

  • A clear set of practical to-dos

  • Focused prompts to keep your revision moving forward with intention

This tier is perfect if you want real-time alignment, goals, and accountability — plus actionable guidance to carry you through the week.

What This Isn’t

Revision Support:

• Is not a second Manuscript Development

• Is not a full manuscript re-read

• Is not Story Coaching (ongoing exploratory support)

• Is not a line edit or copy edit

This service is practical, intentional, and revision-task focused, designed to help you keep your revision moving forward with confidence.

Availability

This add-on is available exclusively to writers who have completed a Manuscript Development with me and is offered as an optional next step once MD feedback is delivered.

Scheduling:
Because this service includes live sessions (for the Premium tier), availability is limited and scheduled on a first-come, first-served basis.

Investment

Standard Revision Support — Written Only:

• $ 295

• Four weeks of structured written guidance

Premium Revision Support — Live + Written:

• $395

• Four weeks of one 30-minute live text-chat session per week plus written follow-ups

On a deadline? Rush requests may be subject to availability and may include an additional fee.

Revision Support is a structured four-week support container designed specifically to help you put your Manuscript Development feedback into action without hesitation or overwhelm. It’s focused on decisions, clarity, and forward momentum — not broad theory or analysis.

FAQs

• What if I miss a weekly live session?
  A: We’ll reschedule within that week when possible. If not, you’ll receive a written session summary and prompts instead.

• Does this replace story coaching?
  A: No — this is specifically for implementing Manuscript Development feedback. For broader generative support or early-stage drafting questions, Story Coaching might still be more appropriate.

Revision Support

An implementation-focused add-on for authors revising after Manuscript Development

How revision support works

• Start of Each Week:
  You’ll share a brief update on your revision focus, specific questions, and any short excerpts you want to discuss.

• Support Delivered:

  • Standard: Written response addressing your revision questions and decisions.

  • Premium: A scheduled 30-minute live text-chat session followed by written next steps.

• Weekly Progress:
  You revise with clarity and confidence, knowing what to focus on and why — and you send your next check-in at the start of the following week.

Available to Manuscript Development clients only. Fit and timing confirmed before scheduling.