When you book this service, I’ll read your manuscript closely from an editor and reader’s perspective, paying attention to how the story unfolds on the page. My feedback focuses on structure, pacing, character arcs, emotional beats, and overall flow — with particular care given to tension, transformation, and emotional logic.

You’ll receive in-line comments directly in the manuscript, highlighting what’s already working beautifully while gently pointing out areas where greater clarity, impact, or cohesion could strengthen the story. My goal is never to overwhelm you, but to help your draft fall into place in a way that feels grounded, intentional, and true to what you’re trying to do.

Alongside the in-line feedback, you’ll also receive a developmental summary report that steps back from the page to look at the manuscript as a whole. This includes overall impressions, key strengths, and a small number of focused areas to explore during revision — a clear, manageable map rather than a long to-do list.

After delivery, you’ll have a 14-day asynchronous support window where you can ask follow-up questions via email. This space is for clarification and understanding — not additional editing or revision coaching.

Manuscript Development is also commonly known as developmental editing or a developmental read-through. This service is available for full manuscripts or partial reads. If you’re submitting a section rather than a complete draft, a brief synopsis is appreciated so I can read with proper context.

What's Included

• In-line manuscript comments

• Developmental summary report (big-picture focus)

• Editing and Reader-focused feedback on character, pacing, and emotional payoff

• 14-day follow-up support window for questions and clarification

Pricing / Turnaround

Up to 40,000 words

• $720

• Average turnaround: 2 weeks

40,000 to 55,000 words

• $990

• Average turnaround: 3 weeks

55,000 to 70,000 words

• $1,260

• Average turnaround: 4 weeks

70,000 to 90,000 words

• $1,620

• Average turnaround: 4-5 weeks

90,000+ words

• $0.018 per word

• Average turnaround: 5-7+ weeks

On a deadline? Rush projects are subject to availability and may include an additional fee.

I take a limited number of developmental projects each month to ensure depth and care. Availability is based on both manuscript length and timing.

A 30% non-refundable deposit is required to reserve time for your project. The remaining balance is due once the work is complete and before deliverables are sent.

Payment plans are available for projects on a limited basis. If this would be helpful, feel free to mention it when you get in touch.

Reader-focused story & character feedback to help your draft make sense and fall into place — without reshaping your voice or vision.

FAQs

• What kind of feedback do you provide?
  A: I focus on big-picture story elements such as character development, structure, pacing, and emotional clarity. This service does not include line edits or proofreading.

• Is follow-up support included?
  A: Yes — a 14-day support window is included after you receive your feedback, during which you’re welcome to ask clarifying questions. This window can be extended for a small additional fee if you’d like more time. If you want help translating feedback into action, Revision Support is available as an optional next step.

• Can you review revised scenes or new pages?
  A: Reviewing revised material isn’t included in the core service. However, you can book a separate Revision Support add-on if you’d like focused guidance on specific scenes or sections.

• Why do you require a non-refundable deposit?
  The deposit secures dedicated time for your manuscript and allows me to plan my workload thoughtfully. I understand that writing timelines can shift, and I’m happy to discuss rescheduling where possible, subject to availability. Final payment is due once the work is complete and before deliverables are sent.

Manuscript Development