Story Diagnostic is a short, focused service designed to help writers identify what isn’t working in their story foundation — and understand what to do next.

This is a diagnostic, big-picture service — not a full manuscript review and not ongoing coaching.

Whether you’re outlining, revising an early draft, or feeling stuck because something isn’t quite landing, this service helps you step back and see the story more clearly.

We focus on the core elements that shape how a story works: plot structure, character arcs, motivation, and emotional logic. Together, we look at where momentum breaks down, where tension is misdirected, and what’s getting in the way of clarity.

What you’ll walk away with

A clear understanding of what’s holding your story back, what’s already working, and what to focus on next — so you can move forward with confidence instead of second-guessing.

This service is a good fit if you want help with:

• Developing or refining an outline for a work-in-progress or a completed manuscript

• Understanding why a plot isn’t landing or where momentum is breaking down

• Strengthening character arcs or motivation across selected scenes

• Looking at how specific scenes are functioning emotionally or structurally

• Clarifying the core tension, theme, or emotional throughline before moving forward

• Getting focused guidance on what to work on next without a full manuscript review

This service focuses on specific materials rather than a full manuscript read-through, keeping the feedback targeted and actionable.

When you book, you’ll be asked to share your materials and a few specific questions you want the diagnostic to focus on.

Pricing / Turnaround

• Up to 15,000 words (outline, synopsis, or partial draft)

• Written feedback + development notes

• Price: $250

• Average Turnaround: 7-14 days

On a deadline? Rush turnaround may be available depending on my schedule.

If you’re unsure if this service is for you — I’ll guide you.

One-off focused plot & character development to identify what’s not working — and what to do next.

FAQs

Q: What kind of materials can I submit for Plot & Character Development?
A: You can submit an outline, synopsis, or selected scenes from a draft (up to 15,000 words). This service focuses on specific materials rather than a full manuscript read-through, making it ideal for early drafting, restructuring, or targeted development work.

Q: Is this the same as manuscript development or developmental editing?
A: No. Plot & Character Development is a focused, early-stage service designed to help you clarify and strengthen the foundations of your story. If you have a complete draft and want big-picture feedback on the manuscript as a whole, Manuscript Development would be a better fit.

Q: Is follow-up support included?
A: Yes. Alongside a 14-day clarification window, this service includes one limited follow-up check. You’re welcome to share a small revision or excerpt so I can confirm whether your changes are addressing the core issues identified in the diagnostic.

This follow-up is intended to support understanding and direction, not ongoing revision or additional analysis.

Story Diagnostic