
Outline Clarity Audit

The Outline Clarity Audit is a short, focused service designed to help you strengthen your story before you invest more time into writing or revising.
Sometimes an outline feels off, but it’s hard to pinpoint where the issue is.
This audit helps you quickly identify what’s not landing yet and what to focus on next.
What you’ll walk away with
You’ll receive focused feedback that helps you:
See what’s already working in your outline
Spot gaps, weak points, or unclear elements
Identify where momentum or tension may drop
Know what to adjust before continuing
The goal is to give you quick clarity so you can move forward with more confidence.
What’s included
Review of your outline, synopsis, or notes (up to X words)
Concise written feedback
Key gaps or issues highlighted
Top 3 priority fixes
Clear next steps
This is a quick clarity-focused audit, not an in-depth story analysis.
This is a good fit if you:
Feel like something in your story isn’t working but can’t pinpoint why
Are outlining or early in drafting
Want to strengthen your story before writing further
Need clarity and direction without a full manuscript critique
Focused outline feedback to quickly show you what’s unclear, what’s missing, and what to fix first.
How feedback is delivered
You’ll receive concise, structured written feedback designed to be easy to understand and apply.
This is not a full developmental edit.
It’s a focused audit to help you quickly identify what matters most and what to do next.
Pricing / Turnaround
Up to 3,000 words (outline, synopsis, or notes)
Written feedback
Price: $59
Turnaround: 3-5 days
This service includes one round of feedback and does not include follow-up revisions.
If you’re looking for deeper, more detailed feedback across a larger portion of your story, the Story Diagnostic may be a better fit.
Writers often book this when their story feels unclear, stuck, or just not quite right yet.

FAQs
Q: What kind of materials can I submit for an Outline Clarity Audit?
A: You can submit an outline, synopsis, or story notes (up to 3,000 words). This can be structured or messy, detailed or minimal. The goal is to assess your story foundation, not polish the document itself.
Q: Is this the same as a full story diagnostic or developmental edit?
A: No. This is a shorter, focused service designed to give you quick clarity on what’s working and what’s not at the outline stage.
If you’re looking for deeper, more detailed feedback across a larger portion of your manuscript, a Story Diagnostic or Developmental Edit would be a better fit.
Q: What kind of feedback will I receive?
A: You’ll receive structured written feedback focused on your story’s core elements, including plot clarity, structure, pacing, and emotional or romantic tension.
This includes identifying key issues, highlighting what’s working, and outlining clear next steps so you know exactly what to focus on.



