Transform Your Manuscript with Tailored Story Coaching
Thoughtful, honest, and encouraging feedback to help you shape your story into its strongest form — without losing its heart.
When you book a beta read with me, you’ll receive in-line comments directly in your manuscript. I focus on how the story flows, how it feels to read — the pacing, the emotional beats, the depth and consistency of your characters, how the plot carries itself, and whether the dialogue rings true. I’ll let you know what’s working beautifully and where things might benefit from more clarity or impact, always with the intention of helping you tell your story, not reshape it into something it’s not.
Alongside this, I’ll send you a brief summary report — a bigger-picture view of your manuscript. This includes overall impressions, key strengths, and a few core areas you might want to explore in revisions. Think of it like a map to help guide your next steps.
This service is available for both full manuscripts and partial reads. If you’re sending a section rather than the full draft, a short synopsis is always appreciated so I can get proper context.
What's Included
In-line comments
Summary report
Flexible formats (full manuscripts or partial reads with context)
Encouraging, honest feedback tailored to your voice and goals
Pricing / Turnaround
Up to 50,000 words
$100 / £80
Average turnaround: 2 weeks
50,000 to 80,000 words
$150 / £120
Average turnaround: 3 weeks
80,000 to 90,000 words
$190 / £150
Average turnaround: 4 weeks
90,000+ words
$250 / £200
Average turnaround: 4–6 weeks
On a deadline? Feel free to reach out. I may be able to offer a faster turnaround depending on my current workload (rush fee may apply).
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Thoughtful, honest, and encouraging feedback to help you shape your story into its strongest form — without losing its heart.
When you book a beta read with me, you’ll receive in-line comments directly in your manuscript. I focus on how the story flows, how it feels to read — the pacing, the emotional beats, the depth and consistency of your characters, how the plot carries itself, and whether the dialogue rings true. I’ll let you know what’s working beautifully and where things might benefit from more clarity or impact, always with the intention of helping you tell your story, not reshape it into something it’s not.
Alongside this, I’ll send you a brief summary report — a bigger-picture view of your manuscript. This includes overall impressions, key strengths, and a few core areas you might want to explore in revisions. Think of it like a map to help guide your next steps.
If you’d like a deeper level of support, I also offer an optional, in-depth reader report. This is where we really dig into the emotional and structural layers of your story — character arcs, themes, pacing, worldbuilding, and more — with tailored suggestions on how to elevate your manuscript in ways that stay true to your vision.
This service is available for both full manuscripts and partial reads. If you’re sending a section rather than the full draft, a short synopsis is always appreciated so I can get proper context.
What's Included
In-line comments
Summary report
Optional in-depth reader report
Flexible formats (full manuscripts or partial reads with context)
Encouraging, honest feedback tailored to your voice and goals
Pricing / Turnaround
Up to 50,000 words
$100 / £80
Average turnaround: 2 weeks
50,000 to 80,000 words
$150 / £120
Average turnaround: 3 weeks
80,000 to 90,000 words
$190 / £150
Average turnaround: 4 weeks
90,000+ words
$250 / £200
Average turnaround: 4–6 weeks
On a deadline? Feel free to reach out. I may be able to offer a faster turnaround depending on my current workload (rush fee may apply).
Ready to get started?
Let’s bring your manuscript to life! Click below to contact me and discuss your project in detail. I’ll be happy to answer any questions and work with you on your ideal timeline.
Deepen your characters. Strengthen your story.
Whether you're struggling with a flat voice, tangled backstory, or just want a second brain on your favourite character, this focused service offers the support and clarity you need to bring them fully to life.
Kind Character Coaching is perfect for any stage of the writing journey—whether you're outlining, revising, or somewhere in between, and goes great hand in hand with my other services.
You’ll have unlimited support via email for 7-14 days after delivery. During that time, you’re welcome to ask questions, share thoughts, or request small clarifications. If you’d like to explore further or continue the conversation beyond the support window, I’ll let you know how to book a follow-up.
What's Included
A Custom Character Questionnaire
This isn’t just busywork—it’s a carefully designed tool that helps you think deeply about motivation, voice, wounds, wants, and transformation. You’ll walk away with a clearer picture of who they are and why they matter.
Written Feedback
You’ll receive personalized, actionable notes that explore your character’s emotional arc, realism, voice, and potential blind spots. I’ll gently point out what’s working and what needs more love.
Scene Review
Depending on your package, you can share up to 5 scenes or excerpts where your character appears. This gives me richer insight into how they show up on the page—and how readers might be experiencing them.
Email & Chat Support
Every package includes a window of ongoing support. You can email me questions or use live text chat (no voice calls, pinky promise). Support is available for 7–14 days after feedback is delivered—depending on your package—so you’re never left feeling lost.
Pricing / Turnaround
Find the heart of your story before you write.
Whether you’re bursting with ideas or stuck in the middle of a messy draft, an outline can be your greatest tool—and your kindest companion. I’ll help you map out your story in a way that feels empowering, not overwhelming. Together, we’ll bring shape to your characters’ journeys, tighten your plot arcs, and carve out a plan that leaves you excited to write.
What's Included
A Custom Character Questionnaire
This isn’t just busywork—it’s a carefully designed tool that helps you think deeply about motivation, voice, wounds, wants, and transformation. You’ll walk away with a clearer picture of who they are and why they matter.
Written Feedback
You’ll receive personalized, actionable notes that explore your character’s emotional arc, realism, voice, and potential blind spots. I’ll gently point out what’s working and what needs more love.
Scene Review
Depending on your package, you can share up to 5 scenes or excerpts where your character appears. This gives me richer insight into how they show up on the page—and how readers might be experiencing them.
Email & Chat Support
Every package includes a window of ongoing support. You can email me questions or use live text chat (no voice calls, pinky promise). Support is available for 7–14 days after feedback is delivered—depending on your package—so you’re never left feeling lost.
Pricing / Turnaround
Work with Me: Let's Bring Your Story to Life
Choose how you’d like to collaborate with me on your writing journey!
Whether you're just starting or you're refining your tenth manuscript, I’m here to guide you. I believe every writer deserves personalized support, and I offer two ways for us to work together:
Book a More Personalized Experience
Want something tailored to you? I can offer you a more customized approach if what you are looking for isn't offered above. Whether you have specific questions or need a unique coaching session, I’ll work with you every step of the way to shape your manuscript.
Not sure which option is best for you? Feel free to message me directly, and I’ll help you decide which path works best for your writing goals.
Let’s make your story shine!
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