Story Coaching & Developmental Editing
Editing services for romance and romantasy writers
Not sure which stage you’re in? Book a free 20-minute Story Sit-Down and we’ll work it out together.
Early Stage
For writers who are outlining, starting a draft, or figuring out their story.
Story Outline Feedback
Clarify your story structure and see what’s working before you move forward.
Best for messy outlines or when something feels off but you can’t pinpoint why.
From $115 · up to 5,000 words7-day turnaround
Learn More“Plotting novels is not my thing, but I really wanted to try it out to see how I’d do. Elin helped me and she was extremely thorough and asked questions that really made me think about my characters and who they are as a person. If I ever decided to plot another novel, I would totally reach out to her again. You really can’t find a better person to help you. Elin is amazing.”
Freya SloaneDark Contemporary Romance
Middle Stage
For writers who have a draft and want clarity on what’s working and what to strengthen.
Manuscript Feedback
Get clear, big-picture feedback on your manuscript to guide your next round of revisions.
Ideal if you want to strengthen your story before deeper editing.
From $0.018 per word3–4 week turnaround
Learn MoreStory Coaching
Ongoing, personalised support to help you think through your story, stay accountable, and keep moving forward.
A steady, supportive space for writers who want guidance as they revise.
From $150 per session · packages available
Learn More“Elin is a fantastic book coach! She is courteous and professional. The wealth of knowledge and understanding she brings as a writer to her coaching clients is invaluable and has helped me grow in my writing as I prepare to publish my first book. I look forward to working with her again in the future.”
Michelle S.Sweet Contemporary Small Town Romance
Late Stage
For writers who are ready to deeply refine and elevate their manuscript.
Developmental Editing
A full manuscript, in-depth read-through focused on structure, pacing, and emotional impact.
Best for manuscripts that are ready for a complete, high-level revision before moving toward publication.
From $0.03 per wordAround $2,700 for a 90,000-word manuscript
Learn More“Elin’s feedback and comments were amazing! She caught a lot of stuff that I hadn’t noticed. I would absolutely recommend her to anyone I know looking for an editor.”
Arya WaltonContemporary Romance
“I’m working on the book and I love your comments. They’re helping me so much to bring the book to life. I’m absolutely loving this stage.”
Marla C.Contemporary Dark MM Romance
Who You’re Working With
I’ve written and published five novels of my own, so I know what it feels like to be inside a draft that isn’t working yet. Since then I’ve edited over 20 romance and romantasy manuscripts, both for my own clients and as a developmental editor for a self-publishing agency. Romance and romantasy are my specialty, and I work across fantasy more widely too, including urban fantasy. Dark or sweet and clean, either end of the spectrum is home ground.
I work with authors to empower them, not just their manuscripts. I want you to come out of the process having learned something, not just been told what to fix. It will always be a collaborative process.
“Your comments have made me smile.”
Rae W.Urban Fantasy
Still deciding? Start with a free 20-minute Story Sit-Down.
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